who likes the new layout?!?

and a little bit more

continuing

I really shouldn't of raced him now he knew what I was. Lucy was going to kill me!
"Yes, I am but how...?"
"How do I know? Well it wasn't our race if you were wondering. I could smell you the second you came in the town. I am a were wolf, and you, being a vampire, are supposed to be my enemy." he sighed.
"Than why aren't you attacking me?" I asked.
"I imprinted on you..." he muttered.
"You what?" I asked. Before he could answer Lucy ran past us.
"Caroline!" she screamed. There was a pack of six wolfs chasing her. I stood up to help her but Jacob grabbed my hand.
"Caroline, go to the Cullen's, the vampire coven near Forks. they will help you." Jacob said than ran off. I chased after Lucy, by the time I caught up the wolfs broke away. When they were out of sight Lucy thought. Who was that? I sighed. His name is Jacob. he is one of those wolfs but he didn't hurt me... I thought. Lucy took a second to read my mind then she was on the same page as me.
"He likes you." she teased. I rolled my eyes but agreed in my head. "And you like him!" She said reading my thoughts.
"Do not! Come on lets get to the Cullen's." Lucy nodded and followed me. As we were running a tall blond vampire and a burly dark haired one ran beside us. The burly one winked at me and the blond smiled at Lucy. She giggled a bit. They led us to a house in the middle of a meadow for a lawn. An older blond Vampire walked over to us.
"Hello, my name is Carlisle, this is my wife Esme." Esme came and stood next to him. "Your escorts are Jasper" the blond one, "and Emmett." the burly one winked again. "This is Emmett's mate, Natalie. And this is Edward and Alice." the last couple. "We keep a permanent residence here. So if you can restrain from hunting in this aria it would be appreciated." Carlsile said. I noticed there golden eyes.
"How do you interact with the humans?" Lucy asked, reading there minds. I elbowed her, she was kinda being rude.
"We do not hunt humans. We survive off of animal blood." Carlisle said.

okay there is some more! i am to tired to type anymore!

done eating time to post!

continuing

I passed a boy that made the horrible smell worse. I scrunched up my nose and walked faster.
"Hay are you looking for something?" he asked, following me.
"I don't need help." I said. I glanced around there wasn't many buildings around so I stopped and turned to look at him. He was tall and I couldn't see his eyes from under the brim of my hat. but I could see his nose was scrunched up too.
"You have been wandering around for some time now." He tilted up the brim of my hat and I looked down. My eyes were still red and I doubted any human no matter how brave or how stinky would be okay seeing that. "My names Jacob, and yours?"
"Caroline," I said still looking down, "Well if you are going to be helpful, can you show me where I can buy some shirts? I am a backpacker and the ones I have are getting old."
"The only clothing stores are in Forks or port Angeles. I could drive you there if you want." he offered. but there was something wrong about the way he said it.
"I prefer to walk." I said turning away.
"Well I could walk with you." he said.
"Sure if you can keep up." I said than started walking a bit to fast than a human would. Jacob kept up easily. When I glanced at him he was staring at me, then he stopped.
"How could this happen?" He muttered to himself so low I wasn't supposed to hear. I looked away thinking he was talking about my eyes. He stepped so he could see my face. then he stepped back. "So are we going to Forks?" he asked.
"Um yeah..." I muttered then started walking again. When we got to the forest I paused. "Do you mind running?" I asked.
"I bet I could out run you." he said grinning.
"Okay then lets see." I said then started running. at first i was running kinda slow, but fast for a human, and Jacob was keeping speed. I glanced at him, he was still grinning. So I sped up, he stayed right next to me. Soon we were flying throughout the forest. Racing each other, taking wild turns to throw each other off. One time Jacob turned i tripped him, but he fell on top of me. He was surprisingly heavy and we landed on the ground. Jacob started laughing. His laugh was infectious and I started laughing too.
"So...your a vampire." he said I froze.

thats all you get for now! I changed a few things cuz I didn't like the old way much.

okay teresa here is what i have done already!

Chapter 1 The Imprinting
I stopped in front of the sign for the town of Forks. My friend and fellow nomad vampire Lucy heard of a strange coven of vampires living near Forks. I didn't like the thought of hunting on another vampires land.
"How about we go towards the shore." I suggested. Lucy nodded and we took off. Suddenly a horrible smell hit them. I scrunched up her noes but continued to follow Lucy, who didn't seem to notice.
"Hay Caroline we are approaching a town. how about you go grab a few new shirts." Lucy said. I had recently hunted well Lucy had not. I strolled into town after putting on the shoes I stored in my bag. Usually a few brave humans would ask questions when I didn't wear shoes. I was having a hard time resisting my thirst as I walked through the town. And I couldn't seem to find a clothing store of any kind.

okay time to eat i will post the rest later!